what do you think of my invite?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: What do you think?
    Love it : (16 votes)
    20 %
    Hate it : (25 votes)
    31 %
    I have a suggestion : (10 votes)
    13 %
    post 19 is an improvement : (14 votes)
    18 %
    post 19 is just as bad : (6 votes)
    8 %
    just start over : (9 votes)
    11 %
  • Post # 3
    8680 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper
    • Wedding: October 2014

    I love the idea of it, but it looks a little busy, maybe a little too much use of the swirly type font.

    My eyes actually had to adjust to read it.

    Post # 4
    6951 posts
    Busy Beekeeper
    • Wedding: October 2015

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  Is the Art Collection some kind of camp or cabin? The “Celebrate” font is making me think of camping for some reason. If that’s the feel of your wedding, I love it!

    Post # 5
    4441 posts
    Honey bee
    • Wedding: January 2013 - Harbourfront Grand Hall

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  I find the something something Art Collection part especially hard to read!

    Post # 6
    11772 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: May 2013

    There is a LOT going on! I like it, though!

    Post # 7
    1024 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    I just find it extremely busy if that makes sense. Lots of different fonts! It’s cute though!

    Post # 8
    1193 posts
    Bumble bee

    I like the concept, but the spacing seems a little tight. I also think there are a lot of fonts going on here, which makes it look a bit busy. The purple in the middle is a little distracting as well, but when I imagine eggplant, it looks better in my mind.

    Post # 10
    5248 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: April 2013

    It’s cute but like others have already said it needs less types of fonts to make it easier to read

    Post # 12
    975 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2014 - Banff, Alberta

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  I really like it! I like the circusy type feel. 

    A few suggestions:

    Move May or make slightly smaller so it doesn`t run into the year. 

    I also think the art collection part is hard to read. 

    Love the other fonts though!!

    Post # 13
    802 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: August 2015 - Backyard Forest

    I think there are too many fonts – I would pick 2 or 3 max and make it look more cohesive. 

    The general format is easy to follow – but I think it’ll look better with 2 fonts for the writing and maybe a third for your names. 

    Also the celebrate their wedding – either take the purple banner out or have it over the whole piece. 

    Post # 14
    111 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: May 2014

    Too many fonts!

    Post # 16
    247 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: November 2014

    I like it, but agree that its a big too much going on. I’ve worked in the wedding invitation industry for 10 years so I love, love, love looking at interesting invites and fonts. I would add a ‘th’ after 17 and I would also re-structure your names to look more like the sample…side by side inside of on top of each other with the ampersand in the background…just my opinion 🙂

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