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    cant.wait.to.be.mrs.d    November 10, 2012   Columbus, GA

    Our wedding is going to be casual, intimate, and fun so we didn't want to go overboard with an elaborate invitation suite.  Simple solution: design our own!  My Fi is very talented when it comes to that kind of stuff, I just get to tell him the info and give approval!  When I asked him to black out our info he decided to fudge everything so you could all see his fonts-hah!  Let me know what you think!

    What do you think of our invites? :  wedding invitation paper design Invitation

     
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    Hobokenbride2012    March 17, 2012   New Jersey

    Very pretty but you should remove all of your personal info.

     
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    auggiefrog    August 25, 2012   Wauwatosa, WI

    Pretty! 

     
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    cant.wait.to.be.mrs.d    November 10, 2012   Columbus, GA

    @Hobokenbride2012:  It's not real info.  The only thing that's right is our first names...

     
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    Juliepants    June 2, 2012   Ontario

    I like them!

     
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    theredhead    January 4, 2014   Orlando, Florida

    Love them! They look great! 

     
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    brenda.m.fields    March 3, 2012   Fort Lauderdale (wedding) & Gainesville (home)

    They look great, but I would more "to" down on the line with "join." You don't want to break up phrases like that.

     
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    Missloveknot    December 31, 2012  

    Looks great, I love it.

     
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    bacon    September 10, 2011   Chicago, IL

    These are beautiful invites!  My only thought is removing the comma after dinner since it looks off next to the ampersand.

     
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    MissTX    May 17, 2013   Texas

    I love them, simple and classy. Good job!

     
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    brenda.m.fields    March 3, 2012   Fort Lauderdale (wedding) & Gainesville (home)

    @bacon:  I see keep the comma. I'm a huge supporter of the Oxford comma.

    Here's why: What do you think of our invites? :  wedding invitation paper design Jfk

    Also, I didn't see it before, but you should remove the hypen in "One-block's walk."

     
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    cant.wait.to.be.mrs.d    November 10, 2012   Columbus, GA

    @brenda.m.fields:  Amen sister!  I have a bachelors degree in English literature and that oxford comma is my best friend!  I do appreciate the catch on the hyphen!  The FI put everything together.

     

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