(Closed) What do you think of the vows I wrote?

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

Super sweet, love all the personal momentos in it.

Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

i like it! it’s personal and offbeat. i kinda wish our vows had been longer, so I think it’s great that you are doing this. just make sure his are close to the same lenght- it might be weird if yours was way longer than his vows.

the only thing that stuck out to me what the repetition of best friend. I would edit it to:

I promise to treat you as my best friend because that is what you are, and the man I WANT to spend the rest of my life with.

 

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