(Closed) Which invitation mockup do you like?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which invitation should I use, and should I include the ampersand or not?
    invitation on the left : (6 votes)
    5 %
    invitation on the right : (64 votes)
    50 %
    use the ampersand : (20 votes)
    16 %
    don't use the ampersand : (37 votes)
    29 %
  • Post # 3
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2011

    I can’t really read your names in the one on the left

    Post # 5
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    Busy bee
    • Wedding: May 2011

    I think the one on the right looks classier.

    The left one looks more informal.

    Post # 6
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    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: September 2011

    I really like the font for the body text on the left, but I think the font with your names on the right is more readable. So maybe use them together? I think the ampersand would look great if you made it bigger and moved it to the left of your names so it’s more prominent.

    Great work designing them! 🙂

    Post # 7
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    64 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: May 2011

    If i got the one on the left i would wonder who was getting married. go with the one of the right. Love them by the way!

    Post # 8
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: March 2011

    I agree….I can’t read  your names in the left one.

    Post # 9
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    Bumble Beekeeper

    Can I do a mashup of your invitations, please? 🙂

    I love the all caps on the left, but I like the font you picked for your names on the right.

    I also love the ampersand, but would rather see it on the line between your names, instead of at the end of the line with your name.

    they’re looking good though!

    Post # 10
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    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: October 2010

    I’m with the other ladies!  I think the one on the right because it’s SOOOO much easier to read your names!  Looking great though.  🙂

    Post # 11
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    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: February 2011

    I love everything about the invite on the right, I’d just go with that. 

    Post # 12
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    Newbee
    • Wedding: July 2011

    @bunnyfoofoo: What font(s) is the bottom invitation written in!  I love the script! 

    Post # 13
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    252 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: April 2011

    I agree with everything daydreamwanderer said. I was trying to figure out how to word what I thought and she did it already so perfectly!

    Post # 14
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: August 2010

    Not related to your question, but I feel like the branches are not definitely branch-like.  In the inspiration it looks like branches, but when I looked at yours I thought at first that it was coral reef or some underwater plant.  

     

    Post # 15
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: March 2011

    I like the invitations on the right better, partly because I can read your names most clearly.

    I advise not to use the ampersand, mainly because of balance. Since the ampersand is on the first line, it’s not balanced (also your name is longer, so it makes that line a lot longer). Aesthetically, the “and” being inbetween your names looks the best.

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