Who can write poems? Help me!

posted 3 years ago in Gifts and Registries
Post # 3
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1787 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Can you post the two from online and what don’t you like about them?  What do you like?  Sweet, funny, rhymes, etc.?  That will help to get a feel of what you’re looking for. 🙂

Post # 4
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5932 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: April 2018

@Ice_cream:  

It used to be, not long ago,

that I would lead and you would follow.

With a watchful eye, I’d forge the way,

keep every snare and foil at bay.

And as days wore on and you grew up

the day finally came where enough was enough.

Older than you were, and wiser than the start,

you were able dear girl, to follow your own heart.

But today it seems, I need my beautiful girl,

to lead me this time, to a bright new world.

With flowers in your hands and wound in your hair,

this gracious bride will follow you anywhere.

So it seems that today the roles are reversed,

and into my future, you lead me first.

 

 

Post # 5
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1346 posts
Bumble bee

Also what is her name? If you don’t feel comfortable releasing that information then give a word that rhymes with her name.

Post # 6
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42538 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

there are many online

1. You are so very young but the years will pass by
and you’ll too be a bride in the blink of an eye.
While you may not remember the day that I married,
the part that you played or the basket you carried.
There will be
a day that will burn bright like an ember.
The day you will wed,you will always remember.
So here is a hankie for the day you will say…
“I need “something old” for my wedding day
Thank you for being our special little flowergirl

2.

A little lady carries flowers
And brings a small bouquet.
She helps us as we celebrate
A joyful wedding day.

She is a princess in her gown,
A picture come to life.
She brings such joy in helping us
Become a man and wife.

We’re glad that she can stand with us,
So graceful and so tall,
And help to make this special time
The very best of all!

3.Thank you for being Flower Girl 
On our wedding day
You were absolutely
Brilliant in every way
You looked so beautiful
In your pretty little dress
It was wonderful to have you
As our special princess

4.

Thank You For Being My Flower Girl Card (Poem and Dress)

Post # 9
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1504 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

@Ice_cream:  How bout this??

 

“When I was just a little girl about the size of you,

I dreamed on day I’d fall in love and then get married too.

So now that I am all grown up about to be a bride,

I want you Eve, for my flower girl, to be right by my side”.

 

 

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