(Closed) Wording for an invite

posted 8 years ago in Family
Post # 3
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7175 posts
Busy Beekeeper

I love that you are honoring all your parents and think that’s a perfect way to format it!

I would prefer seeing it that way vs. Together with their parents – or something like that.

Post # 4
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1927 posts
Buzzing bee

I think you are definitely on track here.  The only thing I would change is the order of the first line.  The way you have it it looks like the second Mr. is together with the Ms., which isn’t the case.  So I would do: Ms. ____, Mr. _____ & Mr. _____ and then continue on as you had it.   It’s lovely wording so I can’t imagine any of your parents won’t be happy with that set up.

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

I like your thinking here.  I think it looks good.  I just did some searching for you and the other way to clearly state that your dad and his partner are together is to put them on one line and your mom on the next line….followed by “Along With” or “Together with” your FH’s parents.  Like this:

Mr._____ & Mr.________

And

Ms.____________

Along with 

Mr. & Mrs. __________

Request the pleasure of your company….blah blah

 

You could also put your mom first if you want.

 I found it odd that it wasn’t easier to find an example for you to use in this day and age.  The Knot had no answers that I could find.  lol

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

Sorry Moose…you were all over this one while I was typing.  🙂

Great minds think alike.  

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