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Wording for Hotel Information

posted 2 years ago in Paper
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poll: Which wording is best:
A-- A block of rooms have been reserved at The Hotel Name under the Ms/Mr. Wedding Please reserve y : (1 votes)

14 %

B-- For your convenience, a block of rooms is being held at the Hotel under the Ms/Mr. Wedding. Plea : (6 votes)

86 %

C-- Your Suggestions : (0 votes)

7 votes

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MstoMrs

Hi Bees!! I'm looking for some help here.

The Mr & I are getting ready to send out our save-the dates. Since we're (and by we I mean me) wedding slackers we never got our web site up and running.

As a result I'd like to include a little business card sized insert regarding hotel information since our wedding is over the Thanksgiving Holiday Weekend.

Which wording do you think is best:

Option A:

A block of rooms have been reserved at The Hotel Name under the Ms/Mr. Wedding Please reserve your room no later than 11/5/2010 to receive the discounted rate.

Option B:

For your convenience, a block of rooms is being held at the Hotel under the Ms/Mr. Wedding. Please book your room no later than 11/5/10 to receive the discounted rate.

Option C: Your Own Suggestions

2 years ago