(Closed) Wording Help!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
Member
272 posts
Helper bee

What don’t you like about the current wording? I think it sounds fine.  What level of formality will the party be?  Is it too late to call it an engagement party – how far in advance of the wedding will it be?  Do you want to include your parents’ names as host?

Post # 6
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529 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2009

I agree with @Cinnamon – it sounds totally fine to me.  Saying “upcoming wedding” makes it pretty clear that it’s before the wedding, which I think is important.

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