- 5 years ago
- Wedding: September 2012
Hey all, I need some comments / help on the wording for the “poem” I wrote to set next to my wedding favors…I like what i have, but I think it might need some tweaking (I have done homemake jam and salsa for my favors) – here’s what I got:
Spread the Love
To our Family and Friends
Traveling from near and afar,
A token of thanks preserved in a jar.
Made from fruits and veggies
We picked near our home,
“Grooms Name” sliced ‘em and diced ‘em
“Bride’s Name” sugared and spiced ‘em
And together we filled each tiny pot,
With our warmest wishes and heartfelt thoughts.
Fruit Jam or Salsa – please take your pick,
To thank you for making our wedding day
More memorable than simple words can convey!