(Closed) Would you love this if I was asking you to be my BM?

posted 5 years ago in Bridesmaids
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

That is a very beautiful card and VERY sweet!  I would be so excited to receive that!

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2014

Beautiful card! I’m concerned about the punctuation…but maybe it looks different because I’m seeing it at an angle? 

What it looks like to me is: “And in order, to make that day complete. Will you be my bridesmaid?” 

I’d change it to: “And in order to make that day complete,” or “…” 

Post # 5
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 2013

Very Nice. I would prob bawl at the sight of them.

Post # 7
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2012

The pacing of the text would bother me, but I tend to be stupid like that.

It’s a lovely card. I wouldn’t need someone to give me a card to ask. I asked my MoH and Bridesmaids via text message.

Post # 8
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

I agree with @Dialysate:, lose the comma after “order” to make the punctuation correct. But other than that, I think it’s adorable and really sweet!

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