Wrote a short story… its brief (about 500 words) – Opinions please!

posted 3 years ago in College
  • poll: Did you enjoy it?
    Yes : (1 votes)
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    No : (2 votes)
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    It could be improved with editing : (2 votes)
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  • Post # 3
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    Bumble bee

    Awesome! I’d love to read more! Stylistically, I love the tone…a bit verbose in errors and some small grammatical errors and word choice flow issues that you’ll fix when you edit but I think it’s great 🙂 Turn it into a novel and send it to me kindle!

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