(Closed) Advice on stds, invites and rsvp cards…

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Hostess
18644 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2009

The invite is a little too small for me to read.  I like the way it looks though.  I think that the STD size is good.  And honestly, I didn’t notice the song request when I first looked at it until I read your note.  I really like the way they look together though!

Post # 6
Member
3344 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

For the song request, I am partial to this wording: “I promise to dance if you play…________”

Post # 7
Member
168 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2011

I LOVE the song request portion, and I do think people will understand the purpose clearly with “Song Request No.1 ______”.

These all look great!

I’m impartial to the sizing of the fonts; I think they look fine now, but your personal preference should be the judge!

Hope this helps!

Post # 8
Member
1562 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

no advice but WOW I LOVE them!

Post # 9
Member
193 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

The invite is small for me to read, I do love your invites.  

My only suggestion is you have the address of the Columbia Station at Four Bridge St, I thought that was the street name (Four Bridge St) and not 4 Bridge St.  I live right down the street from there and I had to google the place cause I had never heard of Four Bridge St, thought that was a road I was unfamilar with.

Just my personal opinion.

Post # 11
Member
1676 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

Just want to say first that I love your invitation suite! …but to answer your questions:

(1) I agree that you should do something different with the font for the website and wedpass.  Either make them in a smaller font or just switch the website to lowercase letters instead of uppercase. 

(2) I love the wording “Because you have filled their lives…”  I say definitely keep it.  It adds a personal touch 🙂

(3) For some reason I completely missed the text asking for song requests.  I think it’s b/c of the white background… but maybe I’m just blind. 

Post # 12
Member
343 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

I would definitely play around with type sizes. you want the most important info to be larger so I would make your web address and password much smaller.

Post # 13
Member
865 posts
Busy bee

let me just say your cousin did a wonderful job!

Post # 14
Member
279 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

Congrats to your cousin — I think the design is strong and the colors are gorgeous; but as a graphic designer myself, I am not a fan of using all caps for large areas of typesetting. It’s generally much more difficult to read then title or sentence case, and can sometimes be viewed as YELLING.

My only other comment to be to make the lense flares a little more subtle. At their current intensity, they distract from the tree illustrations and watermarked script font, which are both quite pretty and very well executed.

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