(Closed) Am I missing something on my invite wording?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 5
13099 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: July 2010

I think listing out “dinner, dancing & fun” makes the invites less formal/more casual but if that’s the feeling you’re going for – I like it.  That would be too casual for my invites and event so it just kind of depends.

I don’t think I would get that it is a cash bar from what you wrote though.  Could you maybe spread that by word of mouth?  (I don’t really know a good way to do it otherwise)

Post # 6
5977 posts
Bee Keeper

Hi think KMM has a point – I also didn’t get from the invitation that it was a cash bar. I also don’t know how else you are able to word the invitation without putting that on there. I would maybe try to spread the word that it’s cash bar by word of mouth.

But…you did say that it’s the norm around you, so maybe people will be expecting cash bar anyway. If that’s the case, I kind of like your wording! I think it sounds cute and fun. Are you going for a more casual setting, or were you looking to make it formal? If more formal, maybe change it to “dinner, dancing and good company”

Post # 7
516 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2010

looks good to me! Happy wedding date (mine is the same 🙂 )

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