(Closed) Any thoughts on our invitation mock up?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

It’s interesting but pretty cool.  Good job!!!

Post # 4
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

OMG I love it! the fonts really set the tone for a halloween wedding. good job!

Post # 5
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

This might be a typo, your weddingbee date says halloween, and your invitations say November, and costumes in November? Not sure if it’s supposed to be like that, or if this was a mistake.

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

A few notes:

-the address to the park is W5785 Lake Drive? Just want to double check on that- I’ve never heard of a house number with a letter in it.

-Is it common in your group of friends/family to list registry information on an invite? In some circles that is a major no-no.

-Some of your wording and sentence structure seems a little off to me. It very well may be just personal preference. If you want me to list everything let me know, but here is a quick example of what I would do:

LODGING

A block of rooms have been reserved at the

Seattle Inn and Suites

Address

Address

Address

Phone Number

Reserve as part of the NAME party for room rates of $79.99, exclusive of tax.

 

Something like that. I prefer more formal (but not stuffy wording). I’d also use a more traditional font.

But I know since you’re doing a Halloween theme you probably want things to sound/look more whimsical. 🙂

 

 

Post # 8
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

If you are going for a very non-traditional wedding, then this is great! 

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

I would take out the registry info, most people frown upon that. Just put it on your website.

Post # 10
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@heliabel:  Totally makes sense! I wasn’t sure what day of the week Halloween falls on, so that makes sense now!

Post # 11
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2011

Cool!

I think there’s a typo in the first sentence? Should is say “and FALL into mutual weirdness”?

Post # 12
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Bumble bee

It looks fun-is there a typo in the quote? Is it supposed to say all or fall in the second line? I don’t get it.

Post # 13
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2012 - Padua Hills Theater

I think it looks great! On the orange paper it’ll be perfect. My only comment is that I don’t think you need to put what time dinner will be served. Unless you think some people will only be coming to the reception? 

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