- 5 years ago
- Wedding: October 2012
Hi! I’m writing up my accommodations card right now and I found the info the sales manager sent me to be potentially confusing. I rewrote it and tried to make it as easy to understand as possible. Can you read through the info and let me know if anything confuses you or if you have any critiques?
“We have reserved a block of hotel rooms at the XYZ Hotel, located at 220 Main Street in Sacramento. To get the Doe-Johnson Wedding group rate, make your reservation in one of the following ways:
-Reserve online at http://www.somehotelwebsite.com and enter the code G-WIKH in the box labeled “Corporate/Group #
-Call 1 (888) 555-1234 and ask for the “Doe-Johnson Wedding” group rate, code WIKH at the “Sacramento Property”.”
And then at the bottom, I have the hotel name, address, and telephone number.