(Closed) Awkward Invitation Wording

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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8353 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2011

What about something like:

Together with their families

Red Pepper Gal

&

Red Pepper Boy

request the honour of your presence

at their marriage

On Saturday, the Seventh of July

Two Thousand Twelve

At One O’clock in the Afternoon

Our Home Church

Church Address

Our City, Our State

I think that it would be less cofusing that way.

Post # 4
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541 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 2011

You could add a “together with” in between the first and second sets of names. Everything else sounds good.

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