Bride, Sister of The Groom Problems

posted 2 years ago in Family
  • poll: What else would make things worse and keep it realistic?

    Cut off all photos of the twins to her..

    Continue to limit the groom from seeing his sister (She is deceiving so he will NOT notice)

    Harsh 'teasing' (Call her harsh names)

    Use her as a waitress at all family gatherings

    Take down photos of Kiara and the groom at the wedding

  • Post # 3
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    Worker bee

    Not to be rude, but. Huh?.. I’ve re-read this twice and it still doesnt make sense to me..

    Post # 4
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    Helper bee
    • Wedding: May 2018

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    emdinan :  I think op is writing a story about a girl who has suffered a brutal past and has a close relationship with her brother. However, that relationship is compromised by his wife who undermines said girl every chance, and the op wants to know what would be a realistic action that shows that the wife is evil? I think?

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    Worker bee

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    handlecat :  Ohh. thank you, I get it now..

    Post # 6
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    Busy bee

    I think to keep it realistic and subtle (I know someone like this fictional wife!) the wife would continue to keep the groom from seeing his sister. The other options are very deliberate actions, would be noticed by the groom and others, the wife would probably be called out for it.  Kinda difficult to make excuses for taking down photos, name calling, designating the sister as a waitress etc but keeping distance would be an easily enough explained situation, eg ‘Kiara wants to come hang out here on Friday night’ ‘sorry groom, I booked dinner out for us that night’ then quickly making a reservation for Fri night and pretend it had been done in advance.

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    Buzzing Beekeeper

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    hypotheticalbee :  

     “I am writing a story and need advice on what happens”

    Well, OP idk about advice on  ‘what  happens’, but my advice to you would be that you need to do serious work on your grammar and comprehension and general style and presentation before going any further.  What you have written is pretty much incomprehensible, I’m sorry to say.   

    Also, why are posting it on a wedding discussion site rather than a creative writing one?  

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