(Closed) Calling all poets!!! Please help

posted 6 years ago in Bridesmaids
Post # 3
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Bumble Beekeeper

It’s been a long time,

but I hope that you

will stand up there with me

when I say “I do”!

 

Is there anything you two used to do together?  School, sports?  Did you want it to be longer?

I don’t know, I just asked mine, it wasn’t cutesy, lol.

Post # 4
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Bumble Beekeeper

By the way, is your wedding really in 2014?  I would seriously advise you to hold off with asking anyone for at least another year!  Many things change over time.

Post # 6
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Bumble Beekeeper

@mattsgirl813:  Ahh, that makes sense!  Let me see if I can come up with anything useful.

Post # 8
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Bumble Beekeeper

It’s been a long time

since we’ve played house

and now I’m about

to become someone’s spouse!

 

You and I, *friend’s name*

have been friends forever

and I’d love it if we

could spend more time together.

 

I’m writing to ask

if it’s ok with you

that you stand up there with me

when I say “I do”!

 

Ok, so I suck at this.  I’ll bet you could come up with something cute if you google!  I also know that a lot of Bees have done cute things to ask their BMs so maybe do a thread search as well?  Good luck! 

Post # 10
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Bumble Beekeeper

@mattsgirl813:  Haha well thanks.  I’ve decided the next time I see “calling all poets” I’m just going to wait to see what other people come up with, hahaha.

Post # 13
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Bumble Beekeeper

@mattsgirl813:  I love your first lines!

The only thing I might change is “what great friends we used to be” because it kind of implies that you’re not now (and even if you aren’t, you don’t want to say so).  I doesn’t sound bad, but maybe say “close” instead of “great”?

I don’t really know anything about poetry.  I think your friends will love your poems, no matter what you say.  🙂

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