(Closed) calling all proofreading bees! i seriously need your help (LONG!!)

posted 7 years ago in The Lounge
Post # 4
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231 posts
Helper bee

Hi! So I just started skimming it and I noticed some grammar errors. I’ll go thru it if you would like but I will tell you know I may really go at it lol. 

 

If you want tho, I will look thru it and PM it back to you. Just let me know!

Post # 5
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210 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

Most important critique: capitalize your “I”s and the first letter in each sentence!  It’s partly a personal pet peeve, but I think it looks really unprofessional and immature not to.  I’d be happy to fully edit this for you (I like editing); message me if you want so I can get your email to send it to you.

Post # 7
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2154 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

I agree with kaliella – fix these easy errors first, and then maybe you’ll get lucky and we’ll fix the rest for you. 🙂

Post # 9
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2011

What company or thing is this contest for? Like is it very well known ?? Just local? Are they extremely professional?

Post # 10
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

@aprose: PM the current version to me and I’ll give it a final look-over, if you’d like!

Post # 13
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2011

Aww okay 🙂

 I think now that all the gramatical issues are taken care of, it seems like a very honest and heartfelt story ! Since it isn’t really a creative writing contest or a college admit essay, I think you are donig great. I really like it 🙂

 

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