(Closed) Can someone proofread this before I send it to the printer for my invites, Thx!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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2750 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

@llgraham:  

1) I don’t think you need to put the specific times for cocktails and dinner. Reception to follow works just fine.

2) The way you wrote the names is perfect since everyone is hosting. Your parents should be named first if that’s not the case. Just out of curiosity, why aren’t you putting down your and your FI’s last names?

3) There is no “and” in the year, and no part of it should be capitalized. (Okay, just saw your note)

4) Some of your lines start out capitalized but don’t need to. (ETA: Just saw your note but leaving this here in case someone else is wondering what needs to be done.)

5) Road needs to be spelled out.

 

These are totally nit picky and not huge deals btw! Otherwise, I love how you worded it and your RSVP.

 

 

 

Post # 4
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1735 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

@llgraham: It all looks good to me! If the ceremony and reception are in the same place I would consider taking out the times of the cocktail hour and reception and just putting “Reception to follow” like you suggested. Less wordy/complicated.

Post # 6
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2750 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

@llgraham:  Well if you’re having a huge affair with some not-that-close guests then I guess identification is a good thing. However, I’m going to assume that most of them know which person belongs to each parental set! Keep the last name off by all means. I was just wondering to wonder 🙂

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