(Closed) Can someone take a look at my rehearsal dinner menus and invites please?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee

Looks amazing!

The only thing that jumped out at me was, in the Stromboli description, “baked into fresh dough” makes it sound like the ingredients are being turned into dough–either “inside” or just plain “in” might cause less of a double-take.

Though, really, that’s such a tiny thing it may not even be worth changing.

Really love the design choices and the color scheme–our living room is in shades of blue and brown ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 4
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

i don’t have anything to edit or critique, i just think they’re really lovely and classy ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 5
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Bee Keeper

They look perfect to me! I’m starving now though… mmm.

Post # 6
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Helper bee

I think they look great! The only thing I might consider (just from a consistancy standpoint) is under “Lasagna” it has the description and then says “and baked”, whereas no other dish has the cooking method… so if it were me, I would leave that off.

 

I love the design!

Post # 7
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2009

The only thing I would do is take out the st at the end of 31 on the invite. Everything else looks great!

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

The only thing I noticed is under ‘Lasagna’ mozzarella is misspelled.  It’s missing a ‘z.’

 

These look great!!!  Now I’m getting hungry! lol

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

The only thing that gave me pause was “Chicken Caesar Dinner Salad”—not sure if “Dinner” is needed in this instance as it’s implied. Chicken Caesar Salad seems right to me. Otherwise, all looks good (and yummy) to me!

Post # 11
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2009

@Mrs.ChubbyBunny: I think not adding the “st” is proper. I know anytime I’ve ever seen the date written in the format you are using, the “st” is never used

Post # 12
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

CB, I swear, you’ve got the best taste, lady!

On the invitation, I wouldn’t say 7 o’clock pm, I would just say 7:00pm.  Otherwise, LOVELY!

Post # 14
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2009

@Mrs.ChubbyBunny: Awesome!! I really like the simplicity of them. And I totally love the design on the invite! ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 14
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2009

@Mrs.ChubbyBunny: Awesome!! I really like the simplicity of them. And I totally love the design on the invite! ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 15
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

They look great!  I agree with the previous comments.  The one other thing I noticed is shouldn’t the date be September 30, 2011 and not September 31? 

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