(Closed) Can you proof my Save the Dates?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
7975 posts
Bumble Beekeeper

Wow! I love it!

Is there an extra space between Fort and McDowell in the Need a Hotel? box?

Post # 4
4663 posts
Honey bee

“We’ve book a hotel” would it make more sense to just use “We booked a hotel”? Other than that, I think they look great!

Post # 5
5657 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: February 2012

Looks great! My only concern is the website url. Is it http://www.mywedding.com/casselbury ?Because since it’s split between lines it looks like just http://www.mywedding.com. you should definitely put the url on all one line.

Can you fit just “mywedding.com/casselbury” on one line? Putting the “www.” on print is outdated nowadays anyway 🙂

Post # 6
168 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

Technically it should read “Which Movie?”, not “What Movie?”.  

I also agree with the website – can you underline the whole link so that it’s clear it’s all one and not two separate lines?

It’s adorable!  I love it 🙂

Post # 7
6394 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

I would put a comma after “30” in the first block, but I’m a grammar nerd. It’s probably not technically needed, since the text is larger, but I would do it anyway.

Other than that and the “which” suggestion, it looks great!

I think the wedding website is clear, but that’s just In My Humble Opinion.

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