(Closed) capitalization & grammar in my invite??

posted 8 years ago in Etiquette
Post # 3
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1675 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

I’m a huge grammar/style nerd and writing and editing are a large part of my job, so I’m happy to weigh in on this.

As far as the “the” vs. “their” joy matter, either one is correct. It’s just a judgement call on your part as to the feeling you want to convey. I personally prefer “their” but that’s based solely on person preference.

As for the capitalization, “Twenty-Ninth” doesn’t need to be capitalized, but May should remain capitalized, as it’s a proper noun. Additionally, “Two Thousand Ten” doesn’t require capitalization either.

Otherwise it looks great!

Post # 5
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339 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

“Did I do thatttt??”  Sorry! I couldn’t resist!! 🙂

hergreenapples had great points. 

My only piece of advice: I like the sound of “their” over “the.”

Looks great to me!

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