(Closed) catholic invitation wording

posted 7 years ago in Catholic
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

looks right to me! the only thing i’d do is un-capitalize “request” “at” and “in” because it’s a sentence :]

Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I disagree, my sister and I looked into it and looked at the invites she had at her house and all the first letters of every line were capitalized. I wonder if it should be “together with their parents”, because when you say our then state your names you switch from first person to third person.

Post # 6
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: January 2012

I would change the “our” in “Together with our families” to “their,” since you use the third person plural later on, too.

I would also uncapitalize every single word in the following section, with the two exceptions of “Saturday” and “April”:

Saturday the Twenty-Eighth of April

Two Thousand Twelve

At three o’clock in the afternoon

Finally, you need to add a comma after “Saturday”.

Other than that, it looks good!

Post # 8
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

http://www.betsywhite.com/Wording-Guide-W2.aspx for an example of capitalization rules – there are plenty resources out there that say this same thing. you capitalize new thoughts/sentences and proper nouns/dates. You don’t Write sentences Like this in Other situations, so just because you’ve formatted the sentence into a smaller width doesn’t mean that you add in extra capitals.

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