(Closed) Created a STD design.. Need another set of eyes

posted 7 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

i don’t think it looks too busy! It’s very nice =-)  lol, June 95th eh? xD

Post # 3
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think you did a great job. I would remove the row of XXXXXXXX’s below your names.

Post # 4
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

I really like it! I dont know if its deliberate but the date looks like it says June 95 2012. Personally I wouldnt use caps for the last part “Formal invitation to follow”

Post # 5
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I think it looks great!

 @julies1949: I think the Xs are just to black out their last names.

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I don’t think it looks to busy. I would remove the X’s and maybe just maybe adjust your & sign.. it looks a little off to me.

But GREAT JOB:)

Post # 8
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

oh wait- I assumed you wrote June 95th for privacy.  If that’s actually supposed to be another number I totally can’t read it, lol. 

 

@julies1949: lol

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

If the X’s are there to block out names, then okay. If not, I would remove them. As stated before, I think that you put June 95 for privacy reasons because I can’t think of any other number it should be looking like that!The & sign should be moved a tad to the right.

Other than that, AWESOME job. I love them!

Post # 10
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I think the busy-ness is coming from having two sets of scrolls. Try removing the bottom one. Nicely done though!

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I think the busy-ness is coming from having two sets of scrolls. Try removing the bottom one. Nicely done though!

Post # 12
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I think the busy-ness is coming from having two sets of scrolls. Try removing the bottom one. Nicely done though!

Post # 13
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I like them alot, the only thing I would do is move “formal invitation to follow” down just a smidge! 

Also, off topic, we have the same photographer!! I thoght your pic looked familar…I’ve been watching their website b/c I just got engagement pics done a couple weeks ago.  I love your pictures, they turned out great!!!

Post # 14
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

Are all of the invited guests from the same town the wedding is being held in?  If not then you might want to put the city and state of the wedding on the invite just so everyone can make plans accordingly if they have to travel. 

Otherwise like others have said, the & sign seems off center but otherwise it looks good…

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