(Closed) Critique my DIY program fan – Stage 1

posted 5 years ago in Paper
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  • Post # 3
    Hostess
    1427 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    I LOVE Feel Script but feel that it’s used a bit too much from a visual standpoint. It now takes away from the beauty of the font used in your names when it’s everywhere on the program. Also the ampersand looks like its a third font? I’d probably cut down the Feel Script usage, select a different font for the rest of the words and use the second font’s ampersand.

    Post # 5
    Member
    1177 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2013

    The only thing that struck me as weird was the explanation of the relationships in the “in memoriam” section. I would leave the explanation off and just list the names. That will also help with the crowding.

    Post # 7
    Member
    847 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: December 2015

    @bluebelle23:  I personally hate the flower graphic thing. 

    Post # 9
    Hostess
    1427 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    @BridieBea: Let’s try to offer constructive criticism for this bee.

    Post # 10
    Member
    1238 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2013

    Looks great, and I agree with PP about fonts. I also love the flower graphic :). Are you planning on including anything about the structure of the ceremony?

    Post # 12
    Member
    943 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: August 2012

    @bluebelle23:

    I think they are pretty, it just seems crowded and I agree it may be the pretty script. These were mine, I did the fan with pages so I had more room and kept the script smaller with one column.  having multiple columns adds to the crowding. Maybe a slightly smaller font on the names? You could do what we did on the in memoriam section header, just put, “In Loving Memory”…and the names, less to write. I had space so ours said:

     

    In Loving Memory

     

    This page is dedicated to our

    loved ones who are

    here in spirit and will forever

    be in our hearts—

    especially Scott’s father,



    .

     

    Although we cannot see you,

    we know that you are here

    smiling down,

    and watching  over us

    as we say “I Do”.

    Forever in our hearts,

    forever in our lives,

    and so we say our vows

    In Loving Memory.

     

     

    Post # 13
    Member
    103 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    @bluebelle23:  Well, I love your flower graphic!! It’s very springy!! Love it~! If my wedding was in the spring, I would love to have a graphic like yours.

    i actually like the whole program, I don’t think it’s too crowded

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