(Closed) Critique my invitations & wording :)

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 2
45656 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

Ctobin:  typo-  “presece”- missing the n

Post # 3
1283 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Ctobin:  Those are pretty invitations . . . I don’t think I would use the @ . . . it looks very casual and out of place with the rest of the invitation. 

Post # 6
775 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Gold Hill Gardens

Beautiful invites! I think using the “at” symbol in the cocktail hour line seems odd . . . Everything else is so formal! The only other thing I’d change is on the Hotel card. I’d change the phrase to “Reservations must be made by . . . ” instead of “Reservations need to be made by . . .”

Post # 7
2130 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2015

Accommodations looks a bit off center – maybe it needs some sort of flourish on the other side.  Since the RSVP card has that text underneath, it doesn’t look “off”…Accommodations looks lonely!

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