(Closed) Critique my monogram, please

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: February 2012

Looks great! Pretty awesome for a first time designing in Photoshop! 🙂

My only suggest: perhaps move up everything except the date at the bottom to give it a little more breathing room?

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

That looks awesome! My only pickyness would be, I can’t really tell what the big cursive letter is but I’m assuming that’s not an issue for anyone who would be invited 🙂  I’m colorblind but it looks like you used a couple different colors, which makes it less flat than just one.  What are you planning on using it for?

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

I like everything except the cursive letter. At first glance it’s not clear what the letter actually is.

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@coffeegal85:  Yeah, both my Fiance and my names start with S; it’s definitely difficult to find the right one.  Like I said, though, of course people who know you will know it’s an S

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

Haha, sorry, I actually liked the original S better

But the bottom definitely looks better/less cramped

Post # 10
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Honey bee

I thought the first S was an F and the second S is a bit off, but I like the spacing of 2 better. Of course I am being nit picky and it generally looks great.

Post # 11
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

The top-center dot and the one to it’s left are closer together than the other dots.

Post # 12
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: January 1999

Great work!!  The only feedback I have is that the “&” is really huge in comparison to everything else.  Could you try minimizing it a bit?  You should be proud!!!

Post # 13
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@BooRadley:  OH NO now you pointed that out and I totally see it.  eeeep.

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