(Closed) Critique my save the date??

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

Those are really nice.

Post # 5
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Buzzing bee

i love them!

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2011

I really like it. The only thing I can think of that might help would be to have less types of font… correct me if I’m wrong but I think there are 4 different ones and so if you had maybe just 2 or 3 it might look more cohesive? Just a suggestion 🙂

I think they are super cute though!

Post # 7
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

I really like it!  Invitations usually alternate between print and script so that may be why it looks like it’s missing something.  Also, you might want to add your wedding website if you have one!

Post # 8
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

@summerbride12: I have to agree.  They’re cute, but way too many fonts being used.  Of course, I also took classes on graphic design and was lectured about that in the classes and also back when I was in high school in journalism class, lol.

they ARE cute, though!!!!

Post # 10
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Helper bee

My only critique is that the fonts for “save the date” and “August 28, 2011” are a little too close to each other, without being exactly the same.  I would change the date to either the same font as “save the date” or to the same font as “Hermann MO” (if you do it not all-caps, it will still look distinct).

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

LOVE IT!

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2011

These are so cute! I love them! The only thing I would change is make your wedding date font the same font type as the typewriter style text of save the date and the heart. Just so it is more cohesive, because as is it seems like the date font doesn’t really fit because there is no other text in that style.  Regardless, it’s really cute!

Post # 13
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Helper bee

Thanks for linking the free monogram.  How did you change the wording on it though?

Post # 14
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

i love them! i like the colors, and i like the fonts together, it makes them fun=) 

Post # 16
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Honey bee

Can you make the date the same font as the save the date?

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