(Closed) Critique our wording!

posted 5 years ago in Favors
Post # 3
Member
6351 posts
Bee Keeper

My only critique is I might change the first line to “celebrating with us.” or “being part of our celebration”

Post # 5
Member
6351 posts
Bee Keeper

ooh heartfelt thank you is perfect!

Post # 6
Member
6351 posts
Bee Keeper

I’d take out the word gift and just say as a heatfelt thank you. If it’s appropriate I’d add “as a heatfelt thank you for your friendship”

Post # 8
Member
6351 posts
Bee Keeper

I think it’s perfect 🙂 I’m a professional writer and can’t resist a post like this. If you need any other help with wording please message me.

The topic ‘Critique our wording!’ is closed to new replies.

Find Amazing Vendors