(Closed) Details card…do we need to change anything?

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: January 2013 - Harbourfront Grand Hall

Zip codes?  They help with my GPS 🙂

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

OP did it correctly. No zip code. Usually the zip code is not put on an invitation. If you google the address, you will get the zip code.

My only suggestion is that you should spell out Florida, because you spelled out Avenue

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

Rooms have been reserved at

(With no ‘the’? – Just looks better)

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

I probably wouldn’t title the card “Details” but rather “Guest Information”

 

I would also include the rate at which the hotel block is at

Post # 8
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

How about parking info?

Post # 9
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

double post

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I would write: “Join us for a Cocktail hour, dinner and dancing immediately following the ceremony” so people know there is no gap between ceremony and reception. Unless there is…then it would be helpful to know.

I agree. Guest Information sounds better. I don’t think hotel price info is necessary – if people want to book, they will call and find out. Is there a date when people need to book the hotel by though? You might want to include that.

 

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@delicious:  +1 Don’t put the rate.

Post # 12
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

Cocktail doesn’t need to be capitalized.

Post # 14
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Busy Beekeeper

@Garnety:  Yes, but this isn’t an invitation. It’s a detail card, and zip code is a very helpful detail to have. OP, please add the zip code, don’t make your guests google it!

Post # 15
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

What date do they have to book the rooms by?

Post # 16
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Busy Beekeeper

And Cocktail should not be capitalized. It’s not a proper noun, and nothing else in that line is capitalized, so it should conform with the rest.

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