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Helper bee
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Honey Beekeeper
You did an amazing job! They’re beautiful!
Post # 3

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Helper bee
I should have added to not pay attention to the dots around the border of the pages. They were there just a guides for me to cut but my printer didn’t cut straight so it made it look crooked.
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Busy bee
- Wedding: June 2014 - Gold Hill Gardens
Those look great! It’s been neat to watch your whole process through making these 🙂
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Helper bee
hyzenthlay: Thanks. I almost threw in the towel quite few times but whenever I would look at purchasing invitations through another company it was never anything I wanted.
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Busy bee
They look lovely! The only thing I would change is the line spacing of “request the honour…” I would write it like this:
Request the honour
of your presence
at the nuptial mass
uniting them in the
sacrament of holy matrimony
When I read it in my head how you have it written, I feel like I pause in a funny spot when it starts a new line because it’s breaking the flow of a thought. This is of course SUPER nitpicky and I’m sure plenty of people would never notice if you leave it as is. =)
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Sugar Beekeeper
BlueRC: I think they look great. It does looks like a lot of capital letters in bold font. I’m wondering if perhaps lower case might be easier on the eyes?
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Helper bee
Thanks. I will look it over!
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Newbee
BlueRC: Love them You did a great job!! I been thinkin about doing mine similar.
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Helper bee
Giswhatibee: Thank you! It’s been a long process but well worth it because it’s something my fiancee and I did together for our wedding.
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Helper bee
Any other opinions? Does everything look ok – spelling, grammer, etc?