(Closed) DIY Wedding Design – Need Opinions

posted 5 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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163 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 2014

They are very pretty but I would probably space everything out a little more, it looks very busy and isn’t the easiest to read. Also, are there 6 fonts there? I would probably just have two, or max three. 

But those are little personal preferences, they are gorgeous and definitely suit your theme. 

Post # 5
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Helper bee

I think I would probably make all of the small font something simpler and less scripty. 

Also, technically I don’t think you need “please return” before RSVP because RSVP implies the please return part.  

Post # 6
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491 posts
Helper bee

Also, the RSVP date says may 2013, thats probably supposed to be 2014?

Post # 7
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Busy bee

@CoCoCourtney:  +1

it’s really pretty but some parts might need to ease the eye a little by being less scripty and detailed, since there are a lot of details that the eyes are drawn to at the top and bottom. There is a lot of texture with the mountains and the pretty design up top. So yeah, maybe a simpler font for the small wording would ease it up. Or if there were a way to make it less wording? Or play with the sizes of the fonts?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Post # 9
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11272 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: April 2012

@kateisstoned:  i like the landscape pic however, i think the wording appears to be too busy.  i would go to only 2 fonts and make one of them a simple font.  you can still use upper/lower case and font sizes for differences.  i don’t like the look of all those fancy scripts.  be selective where you use it.  it makes it difficult to read and to focus.

are you including a separate rsvp insert?  if so, you can completely omit the bottom line as that info (with the date changed) would be printed on the rsvp insert. 

Post # 13
Hostess
11246 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

@kateisstoned: Like the last font, especially what your names are written in

EDIT – Just seen your questions above. I can’t decide about the lace border

 

Post # 14
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Helper bee

What if you take the lace off the bottom and make the lace at the top the same color as the mountains?

 

I like the simpler text much better. It’s easier to focus and really see the invite. 

Post # 16
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163 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: December 2014

@kateisstoned:  I like the last edit, but would make the “with the love and support of their families” the same font/colour as the rest of the body so your names really stand out (but maybe make it a bit smaller than the rest of the body font so it’s about the same size as it is now.

Also, maybe remove the darker green lace graphic at the top and just have the very small one? Then you have more room for spacing between lines, all of the font still looks a little squished up to me.

I’m not sure if any of that made sense…

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