(Closed) Do you like?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Member
393 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

It’s really cute! I do, however, find it a little confusing :-/ Oh I get it! It’s directions from the ceremony to reception! Sorry, a little slow there. I thought it was a cute insert that just sort of mapped out significant places/landmarks in their relationship.

Post # 4
Member
3978 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I know that PROOF and the lines would be gone, but is “Watsonville” part of the invite? That’s the only thing that looks a little busy to me. Maybe you could change the placement of that? Also, does the venue at the top really say “Corralitos Garage Hell”? lol, maybe I’m misreading.

It’s not really my style but it’s well done.

Post # 5
Member
837 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

It’s cute but it doesn’t seem to be very useful.  I don’t mean that to be mean, I just, as someone who has no idea where that is, wouldn’t be able to follow it very well for directional purposes. 

Post # 6
Member
489 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2011

I think its cute!  But I do agree that the Watsonville overlapping with other things makes it harder to read.

Post # 7
Member
2829 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2011

@kala_way:

ditto, the ‘watsonville’ is a tad distracting..

 

OP: is it possible to move it? In one of my map making classes the director was adamant that text should always be parallel to the horizontal edges of the page–he said it made it clearer easier to read, and less confusing to those reading the maps.

Although I get if there is supposed to be a touch of whimsy. It’s certainly cute though.

 

@shaydenise:

I find it a bit confusing as well (I have no idea where the reference points are and as a guest I would be scouring google maps & adding destinations to my Garmin GPS).

OP: I’m in no way trying to be mean either, just trying to give you a little feedback. With a few tweaks I think it would definitely be okay.

Post # 10
Member
246 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

Much better! This is much easier to read.

Post # 11
Member
1309 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Second one is much better and looks very nice.

Post # 12
Member
5786 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2011

So cute! Want to make one for me? 😉

Post # 13
Member
6015 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: March 2012

That’s amazing … i realllly love it!

Post # 14
Member
10851 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2010

I like the second one a lot more, but something about the shadow effect hurts my eyes a bit.

Post # 15
Member
3166 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

2nd one is so much clearer, but i agree – the shadow hurts my eyes too.

Post # 16
Member
61 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

2nd one is so cute! First was too cluttered.

Though it might need something in the middle now.  lol

The topic ‘Do you like?’ is closed to new replies.

Find Amazing Vendors