(Closed) Does everything look right? And spelled right?

posted 6 years ago in Food
Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

@megan26:  looks yummy, one comment is some of your food names are capitalised and some aren’t and I would do them all or none of them except the first word.  ie 

Chicken Piccata

Chef carved roast beef  (So if all caps I would have Chef carved Roast Beef).

Also I would say just Entree myself as to me it looks a little odd to make the french word plural (but I am from NZ so it might be different in the USA) and Entree means Starter here also not Main so I am prob way off ๐Ÿ™‚

Also why dont you make a seperate category for Dessert – not put it in Entree? And then list Fancy Pastries, then cake. Also after cake you could say (boxed to take away upon request) or something. 

Anyway, hope this helps. 

 

Post # 5
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Worker bee

sounds sooo good.

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

Yours had some in title font and some as regular lowercase font so I swapped everything out for title font. I also changed some of the punctuation and wording. Suggestions are in brackets in capital letters.

Tonight’s Menu (Served Buffet Style)

Salad

Mixed Greens with Fresh Strawberries, Candied Pecans and Feta Cheese, Served with Vidalia Onion Dressing

Main

Baked Chicken Piccata: [CONSIDER INCLUDING DESCRIPTION OF WHAT IT IS]

Chef-Carved Roast Beef, Served with Au Jus

Pasta Primavera: Penne Pasta and Vegetables, Tossed in a Light Alfredo Sauce

Sides

Pacific Blend of Vegetables

Au Gratin Potatoes

Dessert

Assorted Pastries

Wedding Cake: White Almond Cake with Raspberry Filling

to follow at coffee station and boxed up for you to enjoy [THIS IS CONFUSING. WHAT IS BOXED UP?] at home ๐Ÿ™‚ [PERSONALLY, I WOULD NOT INCLUDE A HAPPY FACE. SOMETIMES IT LOOKS WEIRD, DEPENDING ON THE FONT.]

Post # 8
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I think its weird to have several things capitalized and just as many things not capitalized.

Post # 9
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

its looking a lot better. i think go with the suggestions of

@lilbluebird:  and not put description about how cake will be served, ie boxed. people can see that for themselves. also i personally wouldnt put a smiley face. the menu looks lovely.

Post # 10
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Chef carved Roast Beef served with au jus


I’m pretty sure you should skip the ‘with’.

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