(Closed) Feedback needed On invite wording

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

i think everything looks okay.

the part about kids on the rsvp throws me off for some reason. but i don’t know of a better way to word it /:

also- i know you weren’t asking for design advice, but the font for all of the info is kind of hard to read and is very overwhelming. i’d do the headings (RSVP, RECEPTION, etc) in that font, and the info in the other font. just a bit of advice.

Post # 5
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@lilone35:  ahhh, okay.

the font you have for the big titles? switch that with the font you have for everything else. and make the stuff in the handwriting-ish font be the font you had for the big titles. so the titles are in the handwriting font, and the rest is in the plain font. does that make sense?

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@lilone35:  you could always try it. and if you don’t like it, switch it back. it’s just a suggestion. i don’t want you to have “hard to read” invites, you know?

either way, everything wording wise looks good (:

Post # 10
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

bolded is slightly better. if it’s clear and easy to read when it’s printed? go with it (:

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