(Closed) Feedback on Invitation/RSVP

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Member
3041 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

What a lovely invitation!

Just one comments, as RSVP means “please respond” I would remove the “Please” in front of RSVP. It’s a little redundant to say it twice. 🙂

Post # 4
Hostess
8586 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2014

I would add

“at six O’clock in the evening”

 

comma after Wednesday, October Fifteenth

 

I would spell out

Timmins, ON

 

I would add “respond by the thirty-first of august”, spelling it out, and dropping the year.

Post # 7
Member
556 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

@JessicaJupiter:  that sounds good to say please respond by!! 

Post # 8
Member
3041 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@JessicaJupiter: I think “Please respond…” sounds good if you’re worried that just RSVP will sound like a command.

Post # 9
Member
714 posts
Busy bee

@JessicaJupiter:  Turned out really pretty.

the only comment i have: 

– the very 1st line (the honour of your… ) might be a little too close to the border; maybe you can decrease the font size just a little bit to give it more room; 

– or since you have quite a lot of unused white above it maybe split the 1st line into two lines 

the honor 

of your presence…

Post # 10
Member
1123 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2014

@JessicaJupiter:  I think you need another colour in there somewhere. Nothing crazy or bold, just something to break up the blue a bit. Maybe see what it looks like with your names, “Reception to follow” and the first line of your RSVP card in black?

Or, you could invert the colours – the text I suggested to make black, leave blue, and make the rest black instead? So your names stand out more – a bit confusing, sorry if it doesn’t make sense!

Just my thoughts.

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