(Closed) Feedback on my vows please

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: January 2013 - Harbourfront Grand Hall

I like them overall, don’t really care for this sentence: “Most of all, I promise to do all that it takes to keep the happiness that we feel today alive throughout all the years of our marriage.” and the “parent with” part… do you guys already have kids?

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I thiate they are great! I actually disagree with pp and think the “happiness” line is great.. It highlights the importance to love eachother, and work hard at being just as happy 5, 10, 40 years down the road. Great job and right from the heart 🙂

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@krrmee5:  think that*

Post # 7
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: January 2013 - Harbourfront Grand Hall

@whitney83084:  In our vows we say “Though life may not always be as perfect as it is at this moment, I vow to always keep my love for you as loyal and pure as it is today.”

TONS of examples on the interwebs 🙂

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