Post # 16
I LOVE THESE! I loved your original post too but with the little intro i think they are perfect! I am one of those bees that absolutely loves personal vows but also doesn’t think vows should be a page long story of how you fell in love. Yours are a great length and focused on what you are basing your marriage on. Perfect.
I just read your ceremony script too- I think they will flow wonderfully together.
Post # 17
This is really lovely. Personal, but not too long. Says it all and very sweet. *tears*
Post # 18
Love the changes you made! Its so sweet and personal.. tear-inducing for sure.