(Closed) Help Critique my Invites!

posted 5 years ago in Etiquette
  • poll: Skip the printed lace and add real lace?
    Yes real lace all the way! : (3 votes)
    19 %
    No keep it this way! : (11 votes)
    69 %
    Other (explain) : (2 votes)
    13 %
  • Post # 3
    Member
    1562 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: November 2011

    You don’t need a hyphen between two and thousand.

    Disneyland is one word, not two.

    I would add Anaheim, California after Disneyland.

    And I’m not sure on the “invite you to join them as they” since the invite is being issued from the B, G and families.  

    Otherwise, its great.  And I love the design.  Good job!

    Post # 5
    Member
    5242 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: April 2013

    @kayberry:  I like it! Question..I see you are from Canada also where do you plan on printing the invites one you finish designing them? I have no idea where to print mine!

    Post # 7
    Member
    951 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: June 2013

    @sweetchiquita12:  Call your local print shops or try Staples! I have had a local shop do a lot of my printing for me (signs, invitations, etc.) and then ordered other invitations online.

    Post # 9
    Member
    306 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    I would do

     

                                       Minnie Mouse

                                                           and

                                                                  Mickey Mouse

     

     

    as the and is squidged.

    Post # 11
    Member
    2053 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: October 2011

    @kayberry:  Sweet design and beautifully done! We designed our own invitations, too, so I fully appreciate the time and effort that went into making yours.

    I love the printed lace. I think it’ll be more finished/flush than gluing some real lace on yourself, and not bulge inside the envelope. Less time consuming and tedious this way, too. I also like that the printed lace is intentially asymmetrical against the overall composition, adding interest.

    It looks like there is a double space between the words “INVITE” and “YOU” and the rest is single spaced, so you might want to check that spot.

    You might consider adding a space after “together with their families” so that the names stand out more on their own (your actual names might show this already.)

    You might also consider adding a space between the date and the time as everything else is so evenly spaced.

    Post # 14
    Member
    72 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    Check the spacing between words – between Invite you it looks like there is an extra space.

    It’s lovely!!!

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