(Closed) HELP! I need feedback on my invitation wording.

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I would add an ‘at’ before ten thirty and I would capitalize ‘under’ and ‘brunch.’

 

Post # 4
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

It sounds great to me, do you not want to mention your parents? Also is it intentionally lower case for the last sentence?

Post # 5
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

I would switch to

 

Sunday the eighteenth of September   (this one is personal peference

two thousand eleven   (not two thousand *and* eleven)

 

Looks good.

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