(Closed) Help! Invitation Wording

posted 9 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

I think it sounds good!

Post # 4
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Bumble bee

Do you intend to have the bold words bold?  Or just your names in bigger type?

I would personally take out the word “style” and leave it as “Cocktail reception to follow.”

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2010

I’m a little confused. The words, “share and celebrate the joy of their marriage” sounds like you’ve already gotten married. If you’re inviting them to your wedding, you might try something a little less vague that communicates that there will be a ceremony AND reception to follow. (:

Post # 8
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Blushing bee

the second one mizrunzou…exchange marriage vows is what mine says

 

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