(Closed) Help me word my invitations please

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
61 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I think it sounds good. But if you want something informal you could say “invite you to join us as we exchange vows” or “invite you to celebrate with us as we exchange vows.” I think the “request the pleasure of your company” is the only formalish thing you have in the original. 

Post # 4
9145 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 2013 - St. Augustine Beach, FL

Here’s ours:

Maybe add in a line or two to indicate the informaility of the wedding?  We did “barefoot on the beach” to convey the sense that our wedding is informal.

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