(Closed) Help Proof Read my Program/Menu please!

posted 7 years ago in Food
Post # 16
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899 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2014 - 11/15/14-Vineyard

I would change the parmesan even though the restaurant spells it that way. It is super hard to read in that font and color. Can you change it to the darker color like what is on your invitations and change the font to something “less script-y”?

Post # 17
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643 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 1988

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lanibug: I also read “Cider of Events”

Also… it should read Brides Entrance(with an apostrophe)… Brides implies more than one bride.

  • This reply was modified 6 years, 7 months ago by  MrsBonJovi.
Post # 18
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1262 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2015

1. Parmesan, not parmesean

2. Penne pasta instead of noodles. Noodles doesn’t sound elegant

3. Bride’s/Groom’s parents not Brides/Grooms parents

4. Bride’s Entrance not Brides Entrance

5. Exchanging of vows not exchange of 

6. cocktails and hor d’oeuvres not drinks and apps- it sounds classier

 

  • This reply was modified 6 years, 7 months ago by  coffeedrinker.
Post # 20
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27 posts
Newbee
  • Wedding: May 2015

In addtion to what everyone else has said – I would vote for eliminating the line that just says “Parents” and keep the Bride’s Parents / Groom’s Parents labels only.

I’m guessing the names look really odly aligned to us because its all centered? Then with the last names omitted it just makes it look really off?

Post # 21
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Helper bee

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Barbiestylez:  For order of events, is the wedding party walking too? Also would you put the parents on the list first or the wedding party?

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