(Closed) Help with guestbook sign!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

Cute idea!

You’re on the right track, but they still feel a little off. (i.e. love and stove don’t really rhyme, and I don’t like look and book in the same line).. you should also try and keep the syllables matching up if you want sort of a “sing song” rhyming feel to it.

How about something like:

The bride and groom love to cook

so find a recipe in this book

Write a note and send your well wishes

for while they cook as Mr. and Mrs.

It’s still not perfect, but try matching words that even just sound alike “like wishes and Mrs.” and try to avoid using the same sound too often (i.e. I used cook twice and don’t really like that but I ran out of ideas lol)

 

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