(Closed) Help with invite wording please

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Member
3539 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

My parents are paying a small amount of our wedding and we are covering the rest and FHs parents are not even contributing everything but we felt we had to include. Here are our contenders just as a suggestion.

Because you have shared in our lives
by your friendship and love, we
Maria Renee John
and
Eric Michael Dora
together with our parents
invite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the fourth of November
Two thousand and one
at one o’clock in the afternoon
St. Luke’s Church
180 Pine Street
Green, Ohio

 

We have experienced love…
in our parents, families and
friends
and now a new love in each other
together with our parents we,
Stephanie Speller
and
George Wilson
invite you to share with us
a celebration of love
the ceremony will be held
at 2 o’clock in the afternoon
on Thursday, April twenty-fourth
two thousand fourteen
Chapel By the Sea
401 Bay Boulevard
East Bay, Virginia

Together with their parents
(brides name)
and
(grooms name)
request the pleasure of the company of
(line or guests name)
at their marriage
at (ceremony)
(ceremony address)
on (date)
at (time)
and afterwards at
(reception)
(reception address)
at (time)
dress code
“We would be honoured if you would
share this special occasion with us”
RSVP

 

Post # 4
Member
1120 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2009

We paid for the wedding ourselves too, but we used the phrase “Together with our parents” to be inclusive. How about:

Miss HunnyBear & Mr. HunnyBear

Together we laugh, we love, we grow

And on this day we marry

Together with our parents, please celebrate with us

September 11, 2010

XXXX, NJ

at XX XX in the afternoon

Post # 5
Member
30 posts
Newbee
  • Wedding: May 2010

I guess if you really don’t want to hurt your mom’s feelings you should somehow include their names on the invite…the only problem is when you say “together with our parents” it tells me that everyone is contributing.  You could possibly do something like this…

Miss HunnyBear

daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Her Bear

& Mr. HunnyBear

son of Mr. and Mrs. His Bear

invite you to celebrate on this day we marry as

we continue to laugh, love, and grow

 September 11, 2010

XXXX, NJ

at XX XX in the afternoon

 

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