(Closed) Help with vows

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
Hostess
23602 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

@nikkidon:  I love it! I think it’s sweet. I’m wondering if you could change the line from “for this we are certain” to something about sharing your love? I don’t know, I’m no poet but I’m not a fan of that last line. But overal i love what you have!

Post # 4
Member
769 posts
Busy bee

I think they are wonderfully personal vows. I think you could slip in forsaking all others in a few different places.

 

One:

 

Together:   I will be honest with you, kind, patient and forgiving.

 

                 If we’re rich or in a ditch

 

                 In sickness and in Health.

 

                 I Promise to be a true and loyal friend to you.

 

 

 

Groom:      I am your ally in conflict,

 

 

 

Bride:        I am your accomplice in mischief.

 

 

 

Together:   I promise to love you in good times and in bad.

 

                 When life is simple,

 

                 and when life is a rollercoaster,

 

                 forever forsaking all others.

 

                 For there is nothing we cannot face if we stand together.

 

                 For I am yours and you are mine.

 

                 Of this we are certain.

 

TWO:

 

Together:   I will be honest with you, kind, patient and forgiving.

 

                 If we’re rich or in a ditch

 

                 In sickness and in Health.

 

                 I Promise to be a true and loyal friend to you,

 

                 forsaking all others.

 

 

 

Groom:      I am your ally in conflict,

 

 

 

Bride:        I am your accomplice in mischief.

 

 

 

Together:   I promise to love you in good times and in bad.

 

                 When life is simple,

 

                 and when life is a rollercoaster,

 

                 forever forsaking all others.

 

                 For there is nothing we cannot face if we stand together.

 

                 For I am yours and you are mine.

 

                 Of this we are certain.

 

THREE:

 

Together:   I will be honest with you, kind, patient and forgiving.

 

                 If we’re rich or in a ditch

 

                 In sickness and in Health.

 

                 I Promise to be a true and loyal friend to you.

 

              

 

 

 

Groom:      I am your ally in conflict,

 

 

 

Bride:        I am your accomplice in mischief.

 

 

 

Together:   I promise to love you in good times and in bad,

 

                forsaking all others.

 

                 When life is simple,

 

                 and when life is a rollercoaster,

 

                 For there is nothing we cannot face if we stand together.

 

                 For I am yours and you are mine.

 

                 Of this we are certain.

             

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