(Closed) Help with wording please? Any English teachers?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

How about this?

The vows have been exchanged, now the celebration begins. Please join the bride and groom for drinks, dinner and dancing at the beautiful Canandaigua Lake beginning at 4 PM.

Maybe I cut too much stuff that you wanted to include. Also, maybe it isn’t accurate to your reception. I used the drinks, dinner and dancing on our Reception inserts.

Post # 5
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2077 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

I like that, @bubbly234! Very similar to what I was going to suggest!

I was going to suggest this:

Vows have been exchanged, now the celebration begins!  

Please join the bride and groom at 4pm on beautiful Canandaigua Lake for cocktails.  Immediately following will be dinner, drinks, and dancing.

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