Post # 1
I’d like to make sure our guests realize that they aren’t supposed to drink the beer at the reception (it’ll be warm). How does this sound? I’ll put it in 8×10 frame on the favor table.
We brewed this beverage
As a way to say
Thank you for sharing
In our special day!
Please take a bottle
To enjoy at home
We’ll be grateful to you all
For years to come!
The seond to last line is bothering me, but I’m having a hard time coming up with something better. Any thoughts?
Post # 3
Home-brewed beer favors are seriously the best favor I’ve ever heard of. You win at weddings.
Post # 4
I think it sounds great i couldnt think of anything that would fit the poem better that whats already there .. Great Job !!!! If we drank i would totally want this at my wedding …
Post # 5
@GreenEyedMoon: Aww, thanks! It is very “us” to have home brew favors. I hope our guests like it! We’re also having individual bags of strawberry and vanilla popcorn as additional favors, so people who don’t want beer will still get something.
@mrs.lockandkey: Thanks! I think it sounds alright too. I printed it up and framed it just now. If anyone comes up with something better, I can always re-print!
Post # 6
I just tried to think of another, better rhyme for about 10 minutes and couldn’t, so that must mean yours is perfect the way it is! I think both your favors–the popcorn and the home-brewed beer–sound so original and wonderful! I’m sure your guests will absolutely love them!