(Closed) How to word travel-themed bridal shower invite?

posted 7 years ago in Parties
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  • Post # 3
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    Honey Beekeeper
    • Wedding: November 1999

    I would change the part about the “bride and groom asking for gifts…” to

    “The bride and groom are backpacking through Europe on their honeymoon. I suggest gifts that will help them on their journey in lieu of traditional home gifts for those who are willing to participate.”

     

    Post # 6
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    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: October 2011

    I like julie’s edits, my tweaks are similar:

    “The bride and groom are backpacking through Europe on their honeymoon. In lieu of traditional home gifts, participants/guests are invited to gift the couple with something that might aid them on their (once in a lifetime) journey.”

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